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Loved it...

This was a great peice of work. You used numorous camera angles well.
The graphics were great, you used gradients really effectively, and you used your own unique style too.
The storyline was good too, I loved it. You even managed to pack a bit of humour in there. "Son of protein" - Good stuff.
The animation, was also great for the most part, I feel some bits could have been worked on, and would have looked better if you'd have used a higher frame rate. (For example the walking animation from the front veiw).
Sounds were good, you had voices in there, although a foreign language, you subtitled them, and left the text there long enough for us to read.

It was a great peice of work. Keep it up.

dravalanche responds:

Thanks for the kind words.
The gradient were a last minute thing the original just had simple colours which made it really flat so I experimented with gradients to make it catchier. As for the sound it was just people talking throw in reverse and then pitchedshift to get different characteristics (ala Twin Peaks)

cheers

Pretty Good....

The background(s) were fairly amazing, however, you lost a lot of points with that character, he didn't seem to fit in with the background, nor anything else he interacted with.
The animation was smooth, you kept one camera angle which worked well. The text effects were good, you had a moderatly well thought out plot. It was short, but that was clearly the intention, and it worked well. (Alot of people moan about short flashes....just ignore them). Also, the filesize was kept low even after using audio, good job.
It was a good flash, and as I said, the only thing that dropped it's marks for me was that character, he just didn't fit.

Good work though, can't wait to see the next one.
Good luck with your future work too.

theMikey responds:

as i mentioned before the character first was just an animation test...
i was bored, colored him and built up background and other stuff around him..
think thats why he doesnt fit that well ;)
i'll work on that in episode 2 :)
THX 4 your review dude! :D

Great

Good drawings, nice animation - some bits choppy, but great in general. Unfortunatly kiddo, the guys on NG see "first flash" and immediatly click 0. And with a file size like that, it'll increase the chance of their doing so. In conclusion, I don't think this flash will get the mark it deserves.
Good flash though, next time, try compressing your audio.

RPin responds:

I already compressed it. I didn't know it was such a serious matter it would make people rate me so low. By being rushy, I just blew the chance I had to be in the front page. Still, it doesn't matter. I'm happy to see people liked it and want to see more from me in the future. Thanks for the advice!

prscht

I can see why Luis didn't pick yours...sorry man, but that was poor, I'm actually quite suprised it passed judgement, I think people just saw NG TTVI and thought 'Instant save point'.
This was kinda crap, and saying 'my cousin submitted that crap game earlier' is even more lame.

wallpaperman responds:

hardeehar well that game was crap, but this was saved so eat lemons

Lol

I love goatse...don't we all.
It was funny...and I don't want it to, but it'll get blammed :(
Anyway, where'd you get those mouths from? I keep seeing the exact same mouths in a load of films.
Lol, loved the music at the end...from that stupid advert no?
Good luck

rudiger2 responds:

i created that mouth. drew it all and everything. i made it a loop and sent it to oads of people on newgrounds who wanted it. they should put me in the credits but i'm not sure if they have lol :P

^^

It was good, can't wait to see the end result. And wallace and gromit rule!

PeacefulDaemon responds:

Cool first positive review, and wallace and gromit do rule.

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but anyway, resubmitting the same movie is cheap....i mean, thats why you can update the old file? So we don't get a load of people resubmitting work 'cause 'the last one had an error'

Agent007fx responds:

The reason was...I wanted to attract more attention for this movie than the original cause what happens is that, once you see the movie, you dont want to see it again even if its updated..so i just resubmitted it so it would attracts other people's attention...thanks for your review

That was Great!

Definatly make more!! Thats probably one of the best stick films i've seen on here (excluding xiao of course :S )
What program did you use? I really need a decent program for 3-d effects, if you can help i would appreciate (or however its spelt) it if you could.
Email at - the_big_bad_spike@hotmail.com
Thanks, and good luck for the future

Sage6868 responds:

Swift 3d v3

good, all good

hey, i liked it....kinda stupid....but being a maker of completely daft flash films myself i understand.
Thought it was great, got potential and yeah, when i was making my film i realised how hard it must have been to make 'the return of ganondorf' and that kinda thing....wonder how impressed the maker of that was with himself :)
Anyway...just wanna say, thanks for having me in your fave artists group!!! :) After seeing this i returned the favour lol, good luck for the future

SkullkidLink responds:

^^ Thanks for the compliment. Yeah, it was pretty stupid now that I look back on it, but I'm thinking of having some fun and remaking it to see how far I've progressed soon and that is sure to be fun! Thanks again!

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